Oh! Great job, Gray! I especially like the way you drew the nose this time, as well as how the lines are clearer and neater, in contrast to some of your messier recent pieces. The hair colouring is very neat and flows properly, they seem to be mostly going down one way, though. Perhaps you could add diversity in the strands, or maybe it's just the perspective or the character's design itself, I dunno, sorry.. The eyes and face show expression which is great, but the cheekbones don't seem to be apparent in here. The shoulders are too small in proportion to the head however, and the lighting is well done but too concentrated; See how the light's only in patches on his (or whatever gender the character is) right (to us) shoulder? This shows in the hair too, but the colour blending and light reflection there was very well done. The mirrors seem pretty close together, but that might just be the church's design, whatever the design is. uvu Love the hair colouring especially, though, and you got the shading spot-on. There is also an obvious contrast between where the light shines onto the character and where it doesn't, and that's wonderful to be honest, especially where you've also added the proper shadows within the light. Some people tend to forget that part when it's necessary but it could also be excluded for special effects or auras, etc. Did I mention how the hair you drew and coloured is lovely?
Ah gomen, my brain juices seem to have come back to me bahahahaa.. Yes, I can tell that the perspective is probably what caused it, trying for a larger upstage close-up to smaller downstage setup on the scale due to the perspective and all. Sketching helps but maybe making a line for the perspective's scale and then drawing whatever you're uncertain about based on that might help? And same, I'm trying to widen my art style and whatnot so I can focus on the smaller more subtle features and stuff because I don't have much experience in cheekbones or anything at all ;v; ;;; Mhm it does make a huge difference, but mines just end up excluding it on accident bwah. orz;; And so shall I /o/ Good luck!~
I don't even know what vanishing points are (my art classes in public school up til now weren't helpful at all so I learnt nothing but like horizontal line and even still all I did was get a name for the place things meet at orz) but uh