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Church Hunter by CrispyGray Church Hunter by CrispyGray
Raffle prize for :iconrokonsan:!~ :iconluvluvplz: I hope you like it! 8D
Copyright Statement 3 by Sophibelle
Character =RokonSan
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CardJack Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! Great job, Gray! I especially like the way you drew the nose this time, as well as how the lines are clearer and neater, in contrast to some of your messier recent pieces. The hair colouring is very neat and flows properly, they seem to be mostly going down one way, though. Perhaps you could add diversity in the strands, or maybe it's just the perspective or the character's design itself, I dunno, sorry.. :iconeheplz: The eyes and face show expression which is great, but the cheekbones don't seem to be apparent in here. The shoulders are too small in proportion to the head however, and the lighting is well done but too concentrated; See how the light's only in patches on his (or whatever gender the character is) right (to us) shoulder? This shows in the hair too, but the colour blending and light reflection there was very well done. The mirrors seem pretty close together, but that might just be the church's design, whatever the design is. uvu Love the hair colouring especially, though, and you got the shading spot-on. There is also an obvious contrast between where the light shines onto the character and where it doesn't, and that's wonderful to be honest, especially where you've also added the proper shadows within the light. Some people tend to forget that part when it's necessary but it could also be excluded for special effects or auras, etc. Did I mention how the hair you drew and coloured is lovely? :iconyuikyaaplz:
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CrispyGray Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
lol oh how I missed your wall-o-texts ;v; :iconbrohugplz: <33
I agree, the shoulders seem off. I tried to have a slanted perspective but kept getting caught between making the shoulders agree with the perspective vs. the shoulders looking too narrow/small o.o
and yup, I've still got a long ways before perfect the facial structure ;v; Which is hard for me because everything is so subtle, but it makes a huge difference D8 I shall study up on cheekbones! <333
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CardJack Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconeheplz: Ah gomen, my brain juices seem to have come back to me bahahahaa.. 
Yes, I can tell that the perspective is probably what caused it, trying for a larger upstage close-up to smaller downstage setup on the scale due to the perspective and all. Sketching helps but maybe making a line for the perspective's scale and then drawing whatever you're uncertain about based on that might help? And same, I'm trying to widen my art style and whatnot so I can focus on the smaller more subtle features and stuff because I don't have much experience in cheekbones or anything at all ;v; ;;;  Mhm it does make a huge difference, but mines just end up excluding it on accident bwah. orz;;
And so shall I /o/ Good luck!~ 
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CrispyGray Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
lol yeah, I think I made it too large upstage when it was smaller xD
I guess I can't avoid it now, I have to draw those darn vanishing points and stuff D8 (reminisces about elementary art class LOL)
a;lksdfj;alksdf I still love your art though Jack! <33

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CardJack Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't even know what vanishing points are (my art classes in public school up til now weren't helpful at all so I learnt nothing but like horizontal line and even still all I did was get a name for the place things meet at orz) but uh
Thank you! uvu
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RokonSan Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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DEM COLOURS 
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CrispyGray Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
LOL I'm so glad I made your holiday 8DDD Feel free to use this and stuff <33333 :iconbrohugplz:
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RokonSan Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeessh <333>u<
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Bunneahmunkeah Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Professional General Artist
I love the lighting! ♥
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CrispyGray Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thank you Bunn! 8D :iconbrohugplz:
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